Living Stories
A. Van Jordan brings together past stories into the living present when he brings Shakespeare’s characters into conversation with us.
Review by Veronica Toth
The ancient Jewish tradition of midrash, in which rabbis tell stories to fill gaps in the scriptural narrative, has long fascinated me. Rather than being viewed as heretical and extra-scriptural, midrash lives side by side with the sacred text it expands and riffs off of, an act of engaging with old stories in fresh ways. Midrash lives on in the practice of contemporary writers—Jewish and otherwise—who use similar storytelling techniques to approach scripture from an infinite array of angles, often exploring the perspectives of characters that do not play a main role in the original text. It’s the balance that midrash strikes between faithfulness and innovation, I think, that intrigues me: in telling new perspectives, new narratives, we declare our loyal—though sometimes complex—relationship to the original.
In his poetry collection When I Waked, I Cried to Dream Again, A. Van Jordan is engaged in a similar project, although the canonical text he riffs off of is not scripture but Shakespeare. The collection both imagines the perspectives of Black characters in The Tempest, Othello, and Titus Andronicus, and draws parallels between these experiences and life in contemporary America. The result is a wide-reaching and textured collage of Shakespearean allusion, current events, and reflection on the surprising ways that tradition and innovation collide.
The title of Jordan’s collection is taken from a quote from Caliban of The Tempest, so the first section fittingly begins with an exploration of Caliban’s character and relationship with his mother, the witch Sycorax. Slotted in between persona poems from Caliban and Sycorax’s perspectives are poems about 12-year-old Tamir Rice, killed by police in Cleveland in 2014. In these persona poems, the distinctions between worlds are blurred: for instance, Sycorax, described as a single mother, worries when imagining Caliban pulled over by the police (“How Far Away is Caliban’s Light?”). In giving Caliban, Sycorax, and Tamir all the careful authorial attention that a protagonist would receive, Jordan centers the tender mother-son relationship, and the fear for a child’s safety in a world hostile to Blackness, that link the three.
Jordan’s nimble use of form becomes more and more evident throughout the collection, another sign of his balance between tradition and innovation. He uses a grid format to explore how Prospero, Caliban, and Sycorax perceive and are perceived by the world, and definition poems to explore the multiplicity of often-racialized connotations within words like “fair,” “suspect,” and “grandfather.” One of the cleverest surprises of the collection is in the fourth section, “When I Waked,…,” which involves an interview format and a healthy dash of metacognition.
Jordan’s project is capacious, so the collection is sometimes cut with explanatory prose as he introduces news stories or explains context. However, the poems are grounded by moments of lyricism that ache with both lost innocence and liberating joy, sometimes at once; for instance, Jordan writes of Tamir Rice that
the opportunities for joy
presented themselves
in more colors than the boy
could name, so he chose Black,
enjoying them all.
Likewise, the poem “Such Sweet Thunder” employs a stunningly crafted refrain that emulates the jazz to which it refers. And Jordan is a master of voice—pieces like the poem “Rokia’s Parents” and the interview “When I Waked, I Cried to Dream Again” that rely heavily on dialogue crackle with realism and humor. The tonal shift in the poem “Aaron the Moor” from “When we bring others into our lives, / we bring all their life into ours” to “But what’s the deal with this brother? / Jumping in bed with a Goth girl like that” reflects Jordan’s project of traversing the distance between canon and innovation, traditional and colloquial, in microcosm.
Jordan’s dual citizenship in the canon and the present day creates rich, imaginative new inroads for exploring the Black experience in America.
The sweep of Jordan’s scope in When I Waked, I Cried to Dream Again is impressively broad, working to connect several distant places and disparate time periods. This variety of forms and approaches lends an engaging, puzzle-like quality to the collection, upending a box of pieces onto the reader’s lap and prompting them to assemble a cohesive picture of the Black experience. However, readers may find that the section “Such Sweet Thunder” poses one piece too many. Here, Jordan draws from his collaboration with filmmaker Cauleen Smith about a cultural revolution in 1960s Bamako, Mali, tracing the relationship between two teenagers in Bamako who rebel against tradition by embracing Western fashion and music. The sestina-heavy set of poems about Rokia, Shango, and the tailor who clothes them in their magical new attire is gorgeous and entrancing, but the layers of explanation required to introduce their context—and the distance between this context and the rest of the collection—pose a distracting disconnection. In an explanatory note, Jordan acknowledges that “These poems hold some of the magic of A Midsummer Night’s Dream, but they don’t use the plot of the play, just the spirit(s) of it.”
The final poem in the collection, “How to Celebrate a Revolution,” demonstrates the capacity of Jordan’s brilliant imagination. Here, despite all odds, he brings all the collection’s threads together: the liberating joy of Rokia and Shango, the loving relationship between Caliban and Sycorax, the gentle innocence of Tamir Rice, and exploration of the Black experience in the U.S. “How to Celebrate a Revolution” is somewhat of a spiritual successor to Gil Scott-Heron’s “The Revolution Will Not Be Televised,” but with a Whitmanian scope of vision. Jordan sketches the small moments of fear and grief that he has located in Black lives and characters throughout the collection:
My people, if you haven’t figured it out yet,
I’m talking about how difficult love is
when a country gets involved,
interrupting those moments when
a mother waves goodbye to her child,
who, framed in the window of a school bus,
waves back. Mother and child both believing
the other will be okay, but both waving gently
behind glass, fearing the other will break.
However, Jordan does not end in grief. He calls on “My dear people, my neighbors, / my conveyors of hopes and workers / of Gordian knots and breakers of stout chains,” declaring, “I sow within you like a farmer / who plants faith in the harvest.” The last stanzas of the poem propose a prophetic vision for the future in which
you jump
on the white dance floor,
stomping with your boots until
your neighbors come outside to see
just what the hell is going on. Well,
infected by your groove, they unplug, they
join in; we all do, and we continue long into the night,
into the coming day, a Soul Train of revolt
lining rural routes, and filling streets
in the cities with our dance.
Literary critic James Perkins argues in Is Literary History Possible? that “[a] literary historian is usually a specialist in some past age. In imagination he inhabits that other time and place as well as his own… the specialist is a citizen of two ages and, thus, can bring one to bear critically on the other.” In When I Waked, I Cried to Dream Again, A. Van Jordan has a foot each in contemporary America and the world of Shakespeare, and readers are the better for it. Jordan’s dual citizenship in the canon and the present day creates rich, imaginative new inroads for exploring the Black experience in America.
Veronica Toth is a PhD candidate at Baylor University whose research focuses on uses of the biblical flood motif in nineteenth- and twentieth-century female coming-of-age novels. Her creative nonfiction and poetry have been published in journals such as Windhover, Relief, and The Other Journal, and her academic work is forthcoming in Religion & Literature and Teaching Theology and Religion.
When I Waked, I Cried to Dream Again was published by W.W. Norton on January 7, 2025. You can purchase a copy from the publisher here.
